Hey, Ultamite, this is The Infinite One, and I just want to apologize for how long it's taking me to get the second part of the Infinite Cronicles up. As promised, you will be featured in it, and you will have a major part in the story. Thank you for your patience, and I promise I'll get it up as soon as possible.The Infinite One (Who Works In Your Best Interests) 23:51, January 1, 2014 (UTC)
PART 2 IS UP! AND YOU'RE IN IT!
The Infinite One (Who Works In Your Best Interests) 02:19, January 2, 2014 (UTC)
Just so you know, in part 3 of the Infinite Chronicles you will get a lot more screen time and your character will change a little bit. Just thought you should know. The Infinite One (Who Works In Your Best Interests) 01:35, January 4, 2014 (UTC)
My and Skyblack's appearance in Super Spinpasta Brawl: Subspace Emissary
- Black hair.
- Hazel eyes.
- Skeleton bandana covering the face (Pretty much like Ghost from MW2.)
- Long black coat.
- Tactical Vest that contains grenades, smoke grenades, flashbangs, knives, weapons and etc.
- Black cargo pants.
- Black boots.
Standard Move = Regular Punch.
Side-Ranged Move = Knife Slit.
Recovery Move = Pull out a pistol and shoot as getting up.
Powerful Move: Pull out a shotgun and blast a long spread of shells.
Ultimate Attack: Pull out a Machine Gun and shoot about 90 bullets per second, almost impossible to escape.
(I know I'm looking like a major badass and overpowered, but that's what I came with, feel free to edit anything you don't like.)
(Also, if I end up being a villain, I won't care.)
- You know how he looks like.
Standard Move = Machete stab.
Side-Range = Machete Slit.
Recovery Move = Throw a knife when knocked down.
Powerful Move = Uppercut.
Ultimate Move = Cuts the victim open and pull out any organ in his vicinity.
- Do I need to say anything?
Well, those are mine and my creation's characteristcs.
23:35, January 26, 2014 (UTC)
Is it okay that I used your avatar as the picture for The Infinite Chronicles Part 3? I know, I should have asked you first . . . sorry . . .The Infinite One (Who Works In Your Best Interests) 01:29, February 3, 2014 (UTC)
If you've not noticed, Meta was demoted. However, after talking with Rick and Fatal, he has also been blocked. He was granted a number of chances, participated in cross-wiki drama, stood above his own rules, violated rules set for administrators, and simply put was granted to many chances. Multiple times he has made big decisions without informing the rest of us nor discussing it first.
The block is set for four months. Feel free to lengthen but please do not end the block or shorten it. Take note; Meta is my friend, and I personally blocked him. It's a preventative measure in case he decides to come back from "retirement". If he makes a request for an indefinite ban, then feel free to do so, but do not end the ban if he decides to request it ended.
I'm sorry to say, but he has to learn. He's my friend, but I talked with Mike and Fatal, who consider him the same, and we decided that this could be tolerated no longer.
15:29, February 17, 2014 (UTC)
Hey Ultimate. Sorry for bringing you towards a hassle for this; but can you organize the chronological order of the Nicotine Crew (and any series that you may have wrote) and leave them on my talk page. I'm getting rid of the Series category, since I found an alternative way - as seen on Knob.exe. So, can you?
01:37, February 20, 2014 (UTC)
Chronological Order - Something that goes in order, from earliest to latest. Like, as a series in whole. It would be like 1, 2, 3, 4. Spinoffs, do the same. But, not like the date that you created it. No. Do it like a list.
- Original series
- Sequel to the original series
- another sequel to the original series
Then for the spinoffs of the series, it would be like
- Spinoff (specific title) 1
- Spinoff (specific title) 2
- Spinoff (specific title) 3
You get where I'm getting at, right?
20:32, February 23, 2014 (UTC)
I'm going to chance to a new account soon, so that's why you might see a random person editing all of my pastas and changing the "Rickomarow" name to theirs.
Don't worry, my old edits will still be counted, and I'll still be an admin, the only thing I'll lose are badges though.
01:13, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
So, this is the new account I'll be using for now on...Just reminding.
03:03, February 27, 2014 (UTC)
Advice and question
I would reccomend linking your series one to another.
You know, add a link to the next story after you're done with it in the previous story.
Just like how I do with Breath.
It'll be easier to go to one pasta to another.
But, I can do it for you, if you want.
23:53, April 20, 2014 (UTC)
RE: RE: Advice and question
My bad. I forgot to make it to look like a question.
The question was supposed to be: "But, would you like that I do it for you?"
Well, nevermind then.
Also, you forgot your signature :P
14:46, April 21, 2014 (UTC)
1. Are you back for good? Like, as in, permanently?
2. Do you wish to retain your rights back, or just be a regular user? Like I said, you can ask for your rights any time that you wish. I can understand if you wish to be a regular user. But do you?
I'm a little busy with another collab series. Callie and I are writing this series. But, you can tell me what you have in mind, and when Callie and I are done with Vengeance, I'll see about our collab.
Leave your idea in my talk page.
Also, why don't you use this avatar?
02:47, June 17, 2014 (UTC)
Meh...I don't know. I just feel that idea doesn't fit too well for Breath, it's way too daydreamed. Maybe we should try using other characters instead of Skyblack, Crimson and others? I don't want to use them in this one, honestly.
And, look, it's pretty easy to write just how I do, and it isn't hard to improve your pastas. First of all, don't put the stuff you put in your pastas like:
Three ponies were out at night, almost drunk because they just graduated from college and celebrated it with some cider... But alcoholic, as you might've guessed. Luckily, they stopped before they actually were drunk. One was an unicorn mare, named Normal Notes and the two others were stallions, both regular earth ponies. One was named Slick Snake, the other Happy Heavyweight.(don't you just love these names? Yeah, I don't have many ideas for new names, sorry)
He then went over to Normal Notes, who was just about to awaken. You may already know what he's going to do... MAGIC! (snort snort)
These ruin the moment, it distracts the reader, and they're anti-climatic. It makes the reader laugh, not because the pasta is funny, it's because it's stupid. Those are one of the main reasons your pastas didn't get attention.
Second, your pasta can have some funny parts, but, don't exaggerate on funny, or your pasta might be classified as a Humor Article instead of a normal pasta. Another thing that didn't bring attention to your pastas.
Third, the way you portray Crimson isn't exactly good. I know you're trying to make him as badass as Skyblack or just a plain badass, but you're kinda forcing it. His quotes are forced, and just make him laughable. The easiest way for a character to be a badass, is to make him emotionless.
Fourth, good narrative. I reccomend playing some Max Payne games for good examples. Or watching a walkthrough on Youtube.
Fifth, good grammar and spelling, obviously. I noticed some of your pastas have some spelling errors.
Sixth, good ending. You remember Neverending's Fear, right? Don't do that again.
Seven, memorable characters. Characters with different and strong personalities. That's what will make the reader happy, sad or angry when a certain character dies. They must think different and act different.
Yes, that's a long and boring tutorial. But, if you want to reach perfection, follow it. And if you want to write just like how I do, simply pay close attention to the stuff I write.
And I hope you don't take all of this as an offense or a critic to the stuff you write. I just want to help. Also, yes, critics. Remember they're not nice people, and when they critic your pasta, they aren't saying "BOO, YOU SUCK". No, sir, they're pointing out the flaws, and a good writer's job, is to avoid those flaws. Read this for more advice.
Also, when you start writing a story, get immersed with it. It will make you want to keep writing and thinking. It improves your creativity.
I hope all of this helps you. I spent an hour writing all of this.
17:34, June 17, 2014 (UTC)
Names for the robots
There will be four psychony robots, right? Well, here are my ideas.
- Steam Gear (male)
- Steel Fang (male)
- Shadow Tech (female)
- Dark Gear (female)
In case you want more r0b0tz, warn me on my talk page.
22:26, June 18, 2014 (UTC)
What I meant, is that what would be way too daydreamt is that an evil unicorn created robot versions of Skyblack, Crimson, Twilight and Fluttershy. But, I don't exactly find evil robots to actually be too daydreamt.
In fact, instead of using an OC to be the evil unicorn, how about we use an actual character from the show? Evil OCs are getting pretty old now for me. Also, it can be a different universe instead of the normal Equestria. How about a steampunk one?
Anyhow, here's my idea for the backstory:
Lyra (for example, if you want to use a more know one, you can tell me) was born by rape. She never met her father, and her mother simply disliked her in every way possible. Lyra grew alone in her mother's basement, eating whatever her mother left for her. She never saw the world outside. Lyra read old forgotten books that the basement tried to hide from her. She struggled to learn to read and write, however, she never learned to talk. That was also the way how she learned about various things, from dragons, to robots.
When Lyra's mother died, Lyra felt forgotten. She builded a statue with whatever she found in the basement. Lyra, however, wasn't satisfied, she wanted it to move and act like a true pony. That was when she left her house for the first time in her life, and stole books from a nearby library, books about how to build robots. She learned fast. After two years, stealing whatever was neccessary to build a robot, she was able to make one. Now, it just needed a brain.
Lyra at that point, had already forgotten what sanity was. One night, Lyra invaded a house where a lonely stallion lived. She choked him to death with a pillow, cut his head open and stole his brain, and implanted it in her robot.
It worked. The robot blinked, moved and talked. Lyra was more than happy, but, not satisfied.
After more than ten years, Lyra builded four robots, using the brains of those she killed, or recently died.
Lyra, however, died two years later from a tumour in her stomach. Leaving the robots alone. They gave themselves names, and gained personalities. They acted like real ponies.
One day, they broke the basement's door open, and left the house.
What do you think that should happen next? Well, I personally stopped writing grimdarkfics with psychonies and stuff, so, what I was thinking is that this should be a sad, dark and serious story. But, I'm not sure you'll be able to make one, as it seems you're more "accustomed" with happy stuff.
Tell me in my talk page if you liked the story, or you like yours more. And should the world be steampunk? Because I simply don't know :P
18:42, June 19, 2014 (UTC)
13:57, June 20, 2014 (UTC)
I don't exactly understand why they suddenly started killing ponies. Like, did they went GTA mode (something I say when someone starts killing people for no reason) or was it somekind of glitch in their A.I that made them go frenzy and attack whatever appeared in their way?
Anyway, I would go with A.I glitch as it's more reasonable. Anyway, after Twilight hacks their A.I, I think everything should reset, fixing the glitch, BUT making them lose ALL of their memory.
So, they get flashbacks of their old normal selves, but can't understand what they mean, and they try to figure it all out while they're hunted by the authorities and bounty hunters.
What do you think of that idea? Also, any ideas for the title of the series? I came up with "Met4lheads", I replaced the "A" with "4" to symbolize the four robots, and also because of l0tz 0f h4x1n.
Also, should Equestria be a wasteland mixed with some deserts? (Some might remember Fallout: New Vegas, but I remember Borderlands when thinking of that).
And yeah, please remember we're not doing this until Vengeance: Hive Mind is complete (dude, I wonder when I'll actually rest).
And by the way (holy shit, this message is long, I know), if this actually survives more than ten parts or something, maybe I'll actually create a wiki for it so it doesn't fill the MLP category like Breath did before it got it's category. Yes, yes, I know people won't know the wiki and therefore they won't read it, but we're writing this for fun, right? right? r-right?
"OH BUT IT SHOULD GET IT'S OWN CATEGORY!"
Maybe. If the bureaucrauts actually accept doing so.
Also (LONGEST MESSAGE EVER IN HISTORY OF HUMANITY, I KNOW), just don't forget to add details to certain parts to it, alright? Like, "We saw three bounty hunters, but we killed them and moved on", that is not right.
The correct way is to make the battle longer, like "We saw three bounty hunters flying with jetpacks, they saw us and started shooting, we dodged their bullets and each of us hid behind cover. I hid behind a dumpster, while *insert robot here* hid behind a bunch of blue mailboxes, and *insert another robot here* hid behind a corner and finally *insert some other robot here* hid next to me". And then, imagine some intense gun fight and write it down.
So, yeah, end of longest message in Wikia history. Where is my Guinness World Records entry?
19:41, June 24, 2014 (UTC)
I see. I would reccomend reading some fanfics to know about the characters, but meh. And to this day I think "Mane Six" is a reference to "Noble 6" from Halo: Reach, but I don't know and I don't care.
And I kind of like Third Person Shooters more than FPSs because they're basically the same shit now.
But, anyway, yeah, good luck trying to think of something.
14:56, June 26, 2014 (UTC)
Ultim, I'm sorry, but, I won't be able to help you with your series. I'm not a story machine, let alone a typing machine, and right now, I need to stop.
I'll complete Callie's Vengeance, and then...I don't know.
But, anyways, sorry I won't be able to help.
Good luck with the story if you manage to write it all by yourself.
16:45, July 1, 2014 (UTC)
I'm impressed, you actually did write pretty well with the first chapter. I even smiled (no, that was not sarcasm, I did smile, because I'm glad that you did actually learn something from my tips).
Keep up like that!
Also, steampunk is when a story takes place in the future, but, the people from the future use a mix between futuristic technology and technology from the past. The term "steampunk" is because it's a future where humanity uses steam powered machines, however, they still have atleast some advanced technology. Like, they may use steam machines, but that doesn't mean they don't have advanced weapons, like laser guns and etc. Steampunk is generally used in a post-apocalyptic world, but it doesn't have to be one.
See hereif you want more information. Yes, the page is long as hell, but you don't have to read all of it. Just read it until you think you're sure of what steampunk is. It's not complex, seriously.
Once again, good luck.
Leave your hate here. 20:52, July 5, 2014 (UTC)
Yes, you did get Lyra's gender right (it's pretty obvious). And what's wrong with having MLP on your history? You can clear it right after searching. And if you forget to clear it, I'm pretty sure there is a way to make your browser delete it every time you close it. Look it up.
And you're welcome as well.
Leave your hate here. 14:17, July 6, 2014 (UTC)
Once again, good job with FoE (Future of Equestria), but, I want to ask you something. Whenever you can, join the chat.
Leave your hate here. 16:06, July 7, 2014 (UTC)
EDIT: Apologies. Please ignore this message. Xelrog T. Apocalypse 17:06, September 7, 2014 (UTC)