The Wiki didn't let me post my whole review in the comments, and I didn't copy it, so this is the summary:
The story was good for how little actually happened, and the way it was executed (the pictures, the writing in general) helped it be good. However, if you add some more events or ideas to the story, it will be less generic (though you could work on a different story instead if you want).
If you have any questions, I'd be happy to expand on this.