Talk:Storm's A-Comin'!/@comment-1196539-20140818150009

The concept isn't bad. The author REALLY needs to do some editing, though. The worst offenders were plurals with apostrophes--very numerous in this pasta.

The "nevermore" at the end also doesn't really tie into the poem or contribute anything. It just seems like a Poe reference thrown in to seem more sophisticated, which doesn't work if the attempt is too obvious.