Talk:Jane the Killer: The Real Story/@comment-24985759-20141123081848

This story is utter crap. It's PAINFULLY obvious that whoever wrote this has no idea how stories actually work, and its continuity in regards to Jeff the Killer, also a crappy story to begin with, is all over the place, often not even making any sense.

This story is just plain stupid. The idea is stupid, the concept is stupid, it's poorly written, this is nothing more than a fanfiction, and a BAD one at that.

Learn to write, learn how to properly convey a story, and quit writing crappypastas. Write something GOOD.