Talk:Alternate Ending (A Toy Story 3 Creepypasta)/@comment-32728677-20170827122217

Great story, although you could see the twist from a mile away if you saw the movie or a great chunk of it, very well made screenshot, and well described details with the connection between the movie and the audience that had the misfortune of watching it. Now putting some critical thought into this, certain details kind of dwindle the believability of this, such as the fact that this did not make headlines because something like "outcry over supposed family-unfriendly theatre showing" definitely would make the news due to how bad it got, plus, even though I thought it was a very nice touch, how in the hell did the narrator get that "screenshot" of Woody dying if the whole thing was a one-time thing that never happened again?

8/10 Great story, but has a couple glaring plot holes.