Talk:THINK! Lost Advertisement/@comment-44518957-20200102013658

I maybe wrong.. But this story is pretty good, the grammar, the concept, but maybe not the part where the girls brain is shown.. But it sounds pretty realistic that the main character writing this story would want to describe the girls brain. I don't know about the part here the little girl crashes, but either way.. A fine story, I kinda like this. (Sounds like something the Shadow Reader would write.. :0>)