Talk:Jeff the Killer: Scars of Corruption/@comment-25215475-20170914194243

Nice story, I like it, well written and it's a good lengthy story. The characters in this are pretty good, Dalton sounds like a badass and a character who I would love to see more about if there are any more stories on this being made. I was half hoping Liu would make an appearance in this story, but all he got were mentions, if a sequel is being made I would really love to see more of him, being the brother of Jeff and all lol. Speaking of Jeff, he didn't make a single appearance either, I was half thinking he was the one in the truck who dropped the box, but that guy's identity wasn't revealed (unless it's Jane as in the end she grabs the two photos of Liu and Randy which appeared in the box). Also Simon was an interesting character, shame he died :(

However one thing that bugs me is that even though this story is canon to Kevin Tierney's Jane the Killer story, there some inconsistencies I kept noticing when reading this. The most notable one that bugged me the most, is that in the Jane the Killer story, it is mentioned several times that Randy and his mother were killed by Jeff, but in this story, they are still alive, so I don't get that. Also, at the end and in the part where Jane makes the response video, it is said that Jane's father Drake was murdered by somebody else, even though we know Jane herself killed him as mentioned in the story. And another thing, in this story it said it takes place 4 years after 2015, so 2019, but Jane the Killer's story takes place in 2011 which is not long after Jeff's incident. So I'm very confused with this list of many inconsistencies. The only explanation I can see is that only some of his story is canon to this, and not all of it, but I'll wait for you to inform me on that one.

Also you spelt "Arkansaw" wrong throughout all the times it's mentioned, it's supposed to be spelt "Arkensaw". And not only that, Arkensaw is the plagerised name of Jane as it was given by a fan who created that "real story" of her and not by the official creator, Kevin Tierney in fact said that he knew that Arkensaw was a plagerised name but he only used it because he didn't know Jane's official last name (which is Richardson btw) at the time of writing the story.

But aside from all that, it was a good story, especially with the cliffhanger at the end with Jane. I'm looking forward to the next instalment (that is if there is one being made).