User blog comment:Heavy On Fire/New Pokepasta!/@comment-24486926-20131006024933/@comment-24486926-20131006044418

Well, the story in general could use it (again, no offense) because to me it just doesn't really add up. It's not cliche, at least (Absol used X! X has died!) I mean, the title kinda makes you think of all the Poke'mon rising up and taking over, and it seems odd that loving pok'emon would just throw their beloved trainers under the bus like that without any explanation...