Board Thread:Writer's Workshop/@comment-24776950-20170720091722/@comment-32461413-20170726132527

I think once you make a few revisions to what you have so far, you should be in pretty good shape to continue on.

I would also say that the whole dream thing could work as long as long as it is integrated more throughout the story. Such as parallels from the dream into the real world, other dreams, etc. In that case, you would have a well rounded story.