User talk:Jacket Mike/Archive 1

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Please leave a message on my talk page if I can help with anything! SOMEGUY123 (talk) 20:53, February 9, 2014 (UTC)

Um... Hi Jacket, I have notice some few spelling errors on your pasta like on Breath 2: The Fall of the Graymane: Part 2, on the first part, you spelled "togheter" rather than "together" please fix the spelling, or of your trying to make trick, never mind

Doctor Gordon Freeman (talk) 07:33, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

Sometimes I make typos, that's because I type too fast and also because English is not my first language. Thank you for warning me though! Also, can you see any other grammatical error?

Jacket Michael   -Want to compliment/insult/flirt with me? Leave a message here!- 15:24, March 1, 2014 (UTC)

ummm how is people dying, getting beaten up and some bad language humour? also ill keep only the ben category on my pasta

First, remember to sign your posts with four "~"s.

Second, if BEN is gonna be a category, then Zelda shall be removed to avoid a category conflict.

Once again, read the Category Listing.

Third, Memes are only for pastas who are actually memes of the internet. A pasta that contains a meme is NOT a meme at all.

Fourth, your pasta's ending IS NOT SHOCKING. It doesn't deserve that category.

Jacket Michael   -Want to compliment/insult/flirt with me? Leave a message here!- 00:44, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

Hello Mr Jacket Mike! (I feel formality would be more appropriate as this is the first time I'm actually speaking to you.)

Anyway I was hoping you could give me some pointers on how to actually start my stories?

I have a Slender story (obvously) and would like to post it in chapters (either one chapter a week or two chapters a week.) so yes..

I would appreciate it if you could get back to me and then I could kind of lay down the story for you?

Until then, eternally yours

Slenderwoman

SlenderwomanSixx (talk) 12:35, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

(A work in progress) Edit
INTRODUCTION ''Who is to say what is and what is not right? Society bombards us with images of the perfect guy or girl. Perfect hair, teeth, eyes, skin... Friends. Who has the right to tell me who I can and cannot be friends with? Last time I checked I was the one who was going to hang out with that person, not them.''

''Now you're probably wondering why I am ranting about something as silly as society and friendship? Well, if you have enough time, my dear reader, I would like to tell you a story of a girl I once knew. Carly. Just your average small village girl, a rather lonely soul. Carly had been without friends for most of her life. Being an only child and homeschooled for most of her life, she never really got the grip of interacting with children her own age. Quite sad, but I am getting side tracked.''

''Yes this is Carly's life story, but not just the sad morbid dribble. In fact the story has a rather happy twist.. Well, right up until the very end. I apologise, once again I am getting ahead of myself. This is the story of how one girl finally manages to make a friend. Who was the friend? No one special. Just a certain someone called...''

Slenderman.

​CHAPTER ONE

Carly layed in her bed and listened to the sound of her parents arguing. Okay, not parents. More like her mother and her wonderful drunk of a boyfriend, Ben. These arguments have started happening more and more over the last few weeks. She couldn't even remember the last time she had a proper night's rest since daddy went away.

Carly's father had passed away three years ago when she was just nine years old. Her mother, thrown into a state of depression, had taken Carly and moved to a small town far from everyone and everything she had ever known. For a child that young, no good could come from that. She couldn't place all the blame on her mother though. At the time she probably thought she was doing what was best for her and her daughter.

Carly turned to her right and looked at the angry red numbers staring at her from her bedside clock. Four in the morning. They must have just woken up, Carly thought. Ben had to report at work at five o'clock everyday. He was a construction worker and their whole team was working on some "special project". She remembered the look of excitement on his face when he announced it at the dinner table the previous evening. She nervously bit her bottom lip at the realisation that she might be the cause of the argument. Her mind played through the events that took place that evening.

"Boss has got us workin' these extra hours you see? So I gotta be up and out of this house by five if I want to make it in time." he shovelled more rice into his mouth. Carly stared disgustedly at the man sitting at the head of the table. What had her mother seen in this pig? She turned and looked at her mother staring dumbfoundedly at her lover. Her mother was a rather young, attractive woman. She had long waist length blonde hair and crystal blue eyes. Her firgure was quite petite and she was a very quiet woman. Her boyfriend, on the other hand, was a loud, filthy human being. His shoulder length brown hair always looked as if it had been deprived of a good wash for months. He never shaved and always smelled of alcohol and tobacco. Lovely young man? She rolled her eyes and snorted.

"Did you say something, Carly?" her mother asked, frowning slightly. Carly understood her surprise. She never spoke unless forced to and it looked like it was another one of those moments.

"No, Clarissa." she refused to call her anything but her name. She did not feel like they had a relationship loving enough to call eachother by those, one could say, pet names. Ben frowned at Carly, obviously upset at having all the attention taken from him?

"Say Clari, howcome you never tell her to call you 'mom' or somethin'? Ain't it disrespectful if she keeps callin' you by your first name?" he pointed his fork in Carly's direction. A slice of meat that looked as though it had been hanging on for dear life, slipped off the fork and fell into the pile of mashed potatoes on his plate.

"No, she's always called me by my first name. Even when she was a little girl. I prefer that anyway." her mother forced a smile in Carly's direction and lowered her head, pretending to eat. Ben looked at Clarissa and just shook his head.

"Well, once you and me get hitched she'll be callin' me good ol' daddy Ben!" he laughed at his own joke and Carly noticed pieces of meat and saliva fly from his open mouth. Daddy? Was he insane!, Carly thought. There was only one man in this world she would ever use that name for and he was already dead. She looked at her mother and sighed at the look of love she saw in her eyes as she focused on the roaring man at the table. Ben was about four years younger and a whole lot dumber than her mother. Although Carly had her doubts on the last one.

Scraping her chair back, she collected her plate and moved towards the kitchen. Just as she pushed open the door Ben's voice called her back.

"Look here Carly, your mom and I have been talking and I, I mean we think it's time you started goin' to school with kids your own age." Carly's heart dropped down into her stomach and she felt her dinner coming back up. School? She couldn't go to school!

"Wait Ben, you said we could still discuss this later?" she heard she mother's small voice through the clouds of worry rushing through her mind. Defend me Clarissa, Carly prayed. For once in your miserable life think about me!

"Yeah and I have thought enough about it. The girl is almost twelve years old, Clarissa. She needs to get out of the house and mingle with some of the other kids in town." he only called her mother by her full name when he was being serious. After the seriousness came the anger. Carly turned desperately to her mother in the hope that she wouldn't let the warning in his voice discourage her. No such luck. Her mother was once again looking down at her empty plate. Battle lost, thanks mom.

"You know we need more money, Clari." luckily his tone had become more gentle and Carly saw love and concern in his eyes as he looked at her mother's slumped figure. "You stayin' home everyday to teach Carly and not workin' ain't really helping our situation." he reached over and gently placed his hand on her mother's shoulder. Carly sighed, it was useless now. Her mother couldn't say no when he acted all sweet and gentle with her. The Big Sucker.

"Anyway," he moved back to his original position. "Your mom has been offered a position as a secretary at one of them finance places in town and she will accept the job." He emphasised the last part by raising his voice.

"and you, little lady, will be starting with high school next month. Holefield High. Has a rather pretty ring to it, don't you think Clari?" he looked more excited than both Carly and her mother. Carly leaned against the kitchen door and pushed it open with her foot. No use trying to argue with him now, Carly thought. She knew he called the school and probably forced them to accept her.

"Yes, sir." Carly turned her back towards the table abd went into the kitchen.

"You know Carly," she heard him call behind her. "You can call me Uncle Ben, for now." she ignored his words and closed the door behind her. Leaning with her back against the door, she whispered through gritted teeth,

"Over my dead body, you swine!" she wiped away angry tears and tossed the plates into the dishwasher. Carly knew she only had two weeks left to prepare herself. No point trying to talk to her mother, she would just take Ben's side. She was on her own, as usual. She sat down heavily on one of the counters in the kitchen, ignoring the laughter coming from the dining room. She stared at the Holefield Forest and wished she could just run away and never come back. She wished and longed.

She wanted to be free.

(SlenderwomanSixx (talk) 14:24, March 17, 2014 (UTC))

It looks pretty good, Slender. Post it!

Jacket Michael   -Want to compliment/insult/flirt with me? Leave a message here!- 15:25, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

we'll see what someguy has to say about that...Myth is a subset of reality (talk) 15:37, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

thats it im turning the tables over at "the other wiki" Myth is a subset of reality (talk) 15:51, March 17, 2014 (UTC)

Awesome! so question... where exactly do I post the story? .-.

Good Day (you're probably so annoyed with me by now Dx)

Anyways I just wanted to find out the process of becoming an admin member or applying to be admin? thanks

deletation appeal whereEdit
i can't found the deletation appeal i need help because the page said it but it don't write anywhere. Creature of the night beware. (talk) 12:24, March 26, 2014 (UTC) That's because the page was blocked to new users like you. But, now, it's open for all users.

Try it now.

Jacket Michael   -Contact me!- 22:36, March 26, 2014 (UTC)

hey... why did my story get taken down?Edit
i wrote a story and it got taken down like *snap* that?

why?

I'm afraid it didn't pass the Quality Standards, miss.

I'm sorry. But, if you want it back here, you'll have to fix it's grammar and spelling. And warn an admin before you do so, or you might get yourself blocked.

Best of luck to you.

Jacket Michael   -Contact me!- 04:00, March 28, 2014 (UTC)

Advice? Please? Edit
Yo waz up! I would like it if you could give me a little advice on what we can make and what I could make for a spinpasta. That would be great!

First, add four "~"s at the end of each of your messages, so I can figure out who wrote this more easily.

Second, you can make various things for spinpasta. It doesn't need to be creepy nor scary. It can be sad, depressing and other various things.

Just remember this isn't the "do whatever you want" wiki. For example, Sonic.exe. It's a banned pasta topic here. Any Sonic.exe pasta will be deleted on sight.

And remember, capitalization, spelling and grammar. A good pasta is a readable pasta.

And remember to use "source" mode. Which can enabled on the top right corner. Using it, you can fix accidental walls of text easily.

Read these if you want more advice.

Good luck.

Jacket Michael   -Contact me!- 23:01, March 30, 2014 (UTC)

first pasta's coming up, please take a look and give me feedback, if you do, expect good pastas from me

Heedfulconch3 (talk) 00:45, March 31, 2014 (UTC)

hello jacketmike, i have recently posted my first pasta, but it has been removed

i try to put it up to wiki standards, so why is this?

Heedfulconch3 (talk) 23:14, March 31, 2014 (UTC)

The reason can be found in your talk page.

Jacket Mike| Message this nice person. 01:00, April 1, 2014 (UTC)

A guy insulting in the chat, maybe a n00b? Edit
This guy LookAdded by GodofmemezThat is all

Godofmemez.wmv comes, Also, did you ever heard of this incident?[http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/User_talk:Godofmemez let me know! ] 16:49, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * He's not a n00b, Godofmemez. He founded this wiki if you look in the right logs and LOLSKELETONS right logs, he gave him bureaucrat and administrator too. Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring 19:41, April 2, 2014 (UTC)
 * Well, Jacket already answered it in my talk, I'll leave this alone unless the problem persists, good day. Godofmemez.wmv comes, Also, did you ever heard of this incident?let me know! 05:53, April 3, 2014 (UTC)

RE: Hiding Autoplay Edit
Thanks for reminding me. I did this on Trollpasta, but I forgot about doing it here. Thanks for that. Do you hear that? That's the grape roaring 01:23, April 4, 2014 (UTC)

A question..Edit
I was checking your user page and I saw the pics. And who is Rule 63 Skyblack?

λ Doctor Gordon Freeman λ ( talk ) 08:51, April 8, 2014 (UTC)

Hey MikeEdit
I was wondering if you had a chance to read any of my stories as of late.

I've been working hard to make them as best they can be and I would love to hear some feed-back if you aree able. ^_^

The Unlucky Researcher (talk) 12:09, April 10, 2014 (UTC)

Um,Edit
yeah, I made sure my story Darkeye met the quality standards of this wikia. Tigerbeast (talk) 20:35, April 12, 2014 (UTC) Tigerbeast

I will be sure to make any changes to Darkeye if it needs any, but please be sure to post back. Tigerbeast (talk) 20:40, April 12, 2014 (UTC) Tigerbeast

Hello there. ^^ --BlueNight18 (talk) 19:20, April 14, 2014 (UTC)

RE: Edit
Meh. I was unsure about that, since I wanted it to be fancy looking. But if it floats your boat on doing that, then do it. I'll make a Black Masa template, and do that. Fatal Disease (talk) 20:57, April 19, 2014 (UTC)

RE: Advice and questionEdit
Thanks for the tip, I'll definetely start working on it. But what was the "question" in your message? Maybe I overlooked it, but you never know...

Whoops, guess that's not good on my part. I have already linked quite a few stories to each other, and I'll finish it on my own. Oh brother, it's Ultimate again... (talk) 16:47, April 21, 2014 (UTC)Ultimatemetaknight

Ummm... Edit
One problem with the finale - You killed off Hyper Flicker. The one I said DON'T kill off? Remember?

Callie  -Leave your wub messages here- 13:27, April 22, 2014 (UTC)

Vengeance Edit
Imma go ahead and write episode 4. After that, you can do the rest. Callie  -Leave your wub messages here- 03:49, April 28, 2014 (UTC)

Vengeance Edit
The way to the sewers is through the Library, remember? Pinkie has to get the head and a hoof.

Callie  -Leave your wub messages here- 19:54, May 3, 2014 (UTC)