Talk:More Like Rhythm Hell

Whoever wrote this, here's my critcism: A.) Unless you are Shakespeare or Jadusable (interchangeable, really) your audience will not know as much as the author does. You wrote this story expecting the audience to know the level structure and characters in the game which most of us would not. It's not Super Mario Bros. You need to tell us some stuff you already know. B.) Creepy font is typically not scary. I mess around with it occasionally, (...actually, all the goddamn time) but doing the whole "some characters capialized/some lower case" thing is cliche as all Hell. I, Da Cashman (talk) 22:33, May 5, 2013 (UTC)