Talk:Jeff the Killer: One by One/@comment-27662289-20170722160129

This is honestly one of the best takes on the story of Jeff the Killer that I have ever read. It's not flawless, there are some grammatical mistakes and some plot points that could be changed to further enhance the story, but overall, this is the only Jeff the Killer story that I actually somewhat enjoyed reading. There's been new life breathed into these characters and it's very refreshing to see a new take on their actions and personality.

The main thing about this story that I was very happy to see, is that Jeff is not portrayed as a misfortunate sympathetic character. Yes, he suffered from ridicule and family troubles throughout his life before he was killed, but these problems felt much more believable than any others I have read. The big thing is that, though he suffered and was plagued by misfortune, the story does not use that as an excuse for him to go around murdering people. Most of the characters were believable and sensible and generally made the reader actually feel horrified by their deaths, which is what should be felt instead of satisfaction at the death of another human being.

To sum up everything I've said, this story is not perfect, but it accomplished a feat that I thought was impossible, and that is making an actually passable story involving Jeff the Killer. I hope in future that this story can be revised and become even better. Until then, keep writing and keep improving. I would love to see more of your work!

-Shion