Talk:Cupcakes (Original)/@comment-36005197-20190419153835

Well, I read this and the most traumatising thing was the quality of the grammar, missing out multiple cases of 'be', one on 'you', etc. The premise is original and enjoyable, to an extent, but when there is the same roten story of a pink shonky making her friends dead as a gonk, this plot can come especially dry.

Cool story, however.