Talk:Jeff the Killer: The Disturbingly Cruel/@comment-25215475-20180121180500

Finished! My god that was one hell of a read, great story! It's shorter than the previous two instalments, which I am glad about because reading so much can make my eyes ache. But don't let that bother you, because the longer the story is, the better. I was so happy when I read that first line containing Dalton's name, I missed him at the end of SoC and wondered where he was when Jane's story was released. Seeing the majority of this story take place in the past when Simon is alive is kind of sad to see considering in SoC you can really see how well the relationship between him and Dalton built up, and looking how the two interacted in this story before his death is just even more devastating, especially since he never got to tell him something he promised to inform him of, sort of like in Game of Thrones where Ned Stark promised to tell Jon Snow about his mother when they meet again but died before he could even inform him, I love it. When he appeared in the dream, it started making me think that Simon could be in limbo or something, sort of like on American Werewolf in London, except he only appears in dreams, wonder if Dalton will see him again... I'm amazed that Irish tyranny predicted correct in the previous story that at the end it was the bodies of Jeremy and Morgan that Derrick walked upon when entering his apartment, I never would have guessed it myself, haha. Kudos to him then. I cannot believe you decided to add something that would please the brony viewers. I cringed so hard when I first saw the reference, I could not sympathise enough with Dalton in the situation. Although it was in the back of my mind, I did not think you were going to include Nina the Killer in your remake, when she was first made she was not very known around the creepypasta community, and the author in fact removed all trace of her when she decided that she didn't want the character around anymore. I haven't read the original story of Nina the Killer myself, but I'll bet this is a damn right improvement compared to it. I'll be even more amazed if you decide to make the next instalment based on Homicidal Liu (which btw, is the first expansion that created the last name "Woods" for Jeff, for those who don't know). Speaking of Liu, I am hoping that in one of the instalments it will be featuring Liu's POV, because he is a character that I am desperate to know more about in this remake series of Jeff the Killer. I have spotted some typos and grammar mistakes throughout reading this, which I hope you'll spot in time (unless you want me to tell you), regardless, the story is still good. Now there is somethings I am still waiting to be answered and cannot wait to find out about, most important one now is who the hell is the Jimmy 4x4 driver? That truck has been around in SoC, appeared in Jane's story with more than one passenger exiting the vehicle, and could possibly even be the one that knocked Jeremy and Morgan off the road. If those driver's from Jane's time are gone, then maybe just maybe, Jeff is driving that vehicle now as that is what I personally believed when SoC released, I cannot wait to find out... if we ever will. The Red, Green, Blue trick is also interesting, could blue be Trent, green be Antoines, and red be the cop who shot Simon? It's interesting speculation that Sherri made. But something else gets me thinking, what if red was Simon, green was Sherri, and blue is going to be Dalton! Dalton has gotta be very damn careful! I do not want him to die for the love of god!

Altogether, I cannot wait for the next instalment.