User talk:Thehumilator23

I Deleted Your Story
You didn't actually write a story. It felt more like a video about theories on how Monokuma was formed. I think what you should do is pick one of the theories you wrote about and write a story using that analysis. I am sorry, but I think you write well and I want to see how well you can write a story about this.

I hope you listen to me and write a story. I legitimately liked your other work; I edited it and I thought it was okay for a lost episode story. I'd love to see your work in a style of story more suited to character analysis.

You can argue with Squidmanescape (talk) 06:37, July 8, 2018 (UTC) on his talk page if you want.