Talk:Jeff the Killer: Liu/@comment-35501667-20180603020514

Finally! The long-awaited sequel I have been waiting for that is centred around Liu’s point of view! I am so pleased!

I noticed quite a lot of grammar mistakes on this (like the one I noticed in my previous comment), I’d inform you of which ones, but I’d have to go through the entire story again and list them down. To be fair though, they are not too bad grammar mistakes, people with common sense should know what they’re really supposed to be, so don’t worry about it.

I didn’t expect Liu to gain a hatred against Jane, if anything I would’ve thought those two would befriend each other as they seemed to have common ground, but after reading further into this story, I can now understand, speaking of Jane, I have my theory about her later (which I obtained after paying closer attention to the story).

That reference to Homicidal Liu was a good one, as bad as the creepypasta itself was, it deserved a mention or at least a reference considering it was the origination of where fans gave Jeff the surname “Woods”. Too bad it wasn’t expanded upon, but altogether I liked it.

Liu being kidnapped was an unexpected part of the story, especially by a bunch of new villains that have not played a role in any of the previous ones. Carter clearly has some of the most serious mental problems I’ve ever heard of. However, one thing I am disappointed in is Liu’s decision to accept Carter’s deal, if he truly believed in the right thing to do, he would never had accepted a deal as unjustified as that, no matter how humane it was, the guy kidnapped him for Christ sake, I can’t agree more with Vivianna’s email, makes me feel sorry for her even. God knows Jeff will never forgive Liu if he learns about that. But at least it gave him the opportunity to publish his book that exposed the cover-ups of Mandeville and the truth about Jeff. Hopefully in the future Liu will come to his senses and decide to expose Carter after so long, allowing himself to suffer the consequences.

In the end though, it’s revealed something I think we’ve been waiting for, Liu is returning to Mandeville, just as Jane planned, and from the ending text “To her this was just another stage of a much larger plan coming together, a plan that even Liu was not fully aware.” it is obvious that Jessica Lum, the woman Liu loves, is part of that plan, fully aware as to what needs to be set into motion. Now all is needed is for Randy to make his way to Mandeville, which leaves open for interpretation that the sequel will be in his point of view, about his past after the events of Jeff the Killer 2015, we know he’s gone into hiding again so I suppose we’ll need a story cantered around his point of view in order to see how he’s going to be finding himself traveling to Mandeville again.

I am also getting the understanding that Jane is a villain, her implying quote at the end of SoC was the only hint, and in her own story that entire implication faded in my mind as she seemed innocent enough, but after interpreting the events up to now, it’s obvious she was playing the “innocent girl” role to fool people, I’ll say she did a good job tricking the reader, getting their mind off of her weird quote from the end of SoC. Jane is up to no good, that is for sure... but then again, that’s just a theory, and only time will tell.

At the end of the day though, this story obtains a recurring theme that has always remained throughout the series, the protagonist being a villain in some way or the other; Jeff the obvious murderer, Dalton being a man of the law but still undertook illegal activities, Jane setting up a malicious plan, and Liu accepted an asinine deal from a man who sins in god’s name to earn wealth, it only made me realise that until now, it’ll make sense if Randy has a story of his own being that he was an antagonist in the first story. This story has changed my opinion on Liu, and my only hope on seeing him lead a hero role now is that he does the right thing in the future as unlikely as it is, I did not expect him to do the bad thing in the first place, so it’s unexpected what he’ll do next.

K. Banning Kellum, I often wonder if you write out your character’s like an architect or a gardener, because your characters are gradually developing an unexpected route that has surprised me, and I hope it happens more often. It’s a great aspect that a writer should use to their advantage, and you make a decent example.

Altogether, this story earns a 9.5/10 (would’ve been a 10/10 if there weren’t so many grammar mistakes, which I will give you if you fix them)