Talk:Jeff the Killer: Scars of Corruption/@comment-29652084-20170823011442/@comment-29652084-20170823012511

To expand:

Simon was a unique character and paced in such a way to where you felt completely sympathetic at his death scene. He was easy to imagine. The other detective seems fairly generic, but that's not bad because it's pulled off in just the right way.

You go into great detail as to just how corrupt the police department is. Even when they aren't in some rich guy's back pocket, they're still trying to cover up things, if for any reason but to preserve their own rep.

The main antagonist doesn't appear at all, and that's fine. It's actually better - especially when compared to previous Jeff stories where he just straight does the impossible.

I'm sure you've thought of this, but the police department wouldn't be getting away so easily with Simon's death at their hands. If another state official weren't down there, the mentally deranged cop would be more than enough reason for Internal Affairs or another federal official to pay a visit. That's really my only criticism; it seems like this small local police department that's now making national news is getting off a little easy for a lot of their misdeeds.