User blog:BoredJeff03/Feedback Both Positive and Negative

http://spinpasta.wikia.com/wiki/Hey_Arnold:_Helga%27s_Dead Recently I made my first spinpasta on Hey Arnold. I'm curious to know some people's thoughts on it. I'd also appreciate constructive criticism and some and pro's would also be nice. Considering how I want to imrpove my writing all kinds of feedback for it would be appreciated.