Talk:Spongebob's Obsession/@comment-35071950-20190706003057

This is so bad.

The detail is bad, the plot, just the whole concept is bad.

It's a total ripoff of that piece of crap called "Cupcakes". Heck, Spongebob's desire to kill Squidward and turn him into a "friend" mirrors that of the ending of Cupcakes, where Pinkamena kills Rainbow Dash and converts her into a dummy thing or something (It's been a few years since I last read Cupcakes).

Lots of cliche, mainly the blood and gore and whatnot. I mean, with this unnecessary concept it's totally necessary, but even going into less detail on the blood and gore would make it a better pasta.

I feel like instead of portraying Spongebob as a psychopath disguised as a kind and silly person, like Pinkie in Cupcakes, the writer should've went into detail on how Spongebob had been driven into this state by Squidward's bullying and occasional abuse. Like, perhaps Spongebob has been depressed throughout the entire Spongebob Squarepants television show due to Squid's abuse, and his and Patrick's attempts to make friends with Squidward or have fun with Squidward were actually Spongebob's way of trying to get closure for all the bullying. Now THAT'S an interesting concept.

Not the worst pasta I've seen, but like almost any other pasta, it has room for improvement.