User blog comment:Fireflowerman/Why Did My Story Get Deleted/@comment-25037895-20150726055538

It was deleted for not meeting the Quality Standards. It felt really rushed. There were multiple times there were opportunities to describe the scene/events more and add suspense. Examples of this: "Until I read the back, It said "Look Behind You!" I turned back there was nothing there.", " "Found you!" the mysterious figure said. He then pulled out his knife and proceeded to stab me with it, but I dodged just in time.", "Everyone then panicked and ran everywhere on the plane."

There were capitalization issues: "good ol' Dennis Eh?", "Hello Everyone", "Now It's my turn", " "That's Right!" She replied."

Punctuation issues: "then some other guy said (this sentence just ends there, it needs punctuation)", "para-shoots together they all jumped out of the plane together." "thing lunged onto the parachute and said, (a paragraph shouldn't end with a comma)".

Wording issue: "Until A a black and white clown".

Also, it really seemed lacking in terms of description and could have been fleshed out.