User blog comment:TheMaskGuy/CREEPYPASTA REJECTED/@comment-5619531-20140615173037

I read your story. It was deleted because it didn't meet the Quality Standards. Let's break your story bit by bit.


 * 4.10.2005 (lost tape)
 * Okay. "Lost Tape" should be capitalized, so I automatically know that this'll be a terrible story off the bat. But I didn't stop there.


 * A footage upload to youtube is by Darth Nixa.the tape was disturbing but the werid thing is that guy wearing mask just comes stalking them and they think its funny that the guy is drunk but they were wrong the man teleports like slender does.
 * Alright. This is a footage pasta. There are issues in capitalizing and spacing. Whenever you start a sentence, you must capitalize the first letter and add a space, so that the previous sentence and the new sentence wouldn't be crumbled together.see how this can be annoying?do you know what I mean?it's a struggle to read it, on your part.


 * so when the 2 boys enter the building and went the elevator then guy with mask comes out and kills them but the cut footage was seen like a boy running with the camera then it stops there
 * Again with the capitalization issue. But I actually went "wat" when I read "went" before the person actually went the elevator. It should be "went in the elevator", not that.


 * if you want to see a disturbing video link is below

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=1mFV4aLXBto

the language is croatia so if you don't speak croatia please use the captions on english
 * Other than the grammar issues, which can be fixed, I actually watched the video and was quite bored with it. That was the reason why it was deleted. Because the video wasn't scary at all. It was rather boring.