Talk:The Hollow World of Twilight Princess/@comment-5448890-20140606070504/@comment-4832646-20140606081245

You didn't fail by any stretch of the imagination. I think this is one of the best Zelda pastas I've seen in quite a while.

I've corrected the only actual problem (always start a new paragraph when someone speaks) and added this to Suggested Reading. I haven't protected it, as is standard procedure for SR articles, in case you want to edit it a little more.