Board Thread:New on Spinpasta Wiki/@comment-1196539-20140309051828

This is an article that I posted here a little while ago--it's since made Suggested Reading, which I'm thrilled about, but not too many people have seen it and I'm interested in some feedback (and hopefully getting it a little more exposure).

Be forewarned that, while it's not so much a "creepy"pasta as other articles, it is a surprise ending story with several similar friends (some well-written, some... not so much) on this site. So, if you haven't read it, I would advise against reading any of this thread below this first post, as there are liable to be some pretty big spoilers.

That said, feedback appreciated. 