Talk:Everything Dies/@comment-24136895-20140326031949

This story is pretty good! I like that it takes a classic creepy part of Pokemon and shows us the point of view of the Paras as its body is slowly taken over. There were a few parts that were a little confusing to read, but that might just be because I'm reading this at a late hour. 8/10 (The ending might have been more surprising if this wasn't in the Pokemon category, but since this is a Pokemon-related story it probably can't be helped?)